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Here are the "before and after" versions of a pivotal chapter in
The Tyler Rose: The Earl Campbell Story,
the authorized biography of the NFL star from East Texas.

ORIGINAL VERSION

EDITED VERSION

New Orleans: The Last Hurrah

"Earl Campbell is one of the truly genuine people I've come across. He doesn't know the meaning of the word 'I'. With Earl, it's always 'we' or 'us'."
- O. A. "Bum" Phillips

Earl Campbell left Houston in a storm of controversy and arrived in New Orleans in a storm of controversy. Houston fans felt he had been unfairly traded and didn't like the backhanded, clandestine tactics behind the trade. New Orleans fans felt too much had been given away in the trade for this "over the hill" player. Whatever the case or the city, Earl was not happy with the controversy or media criticism. Earl felt that too much attention was being focused on him as an individual player when the focus should be on the team effort, in whatever city he was playing football. And something essential was missing from his game when he arrived in New Orleans to play for the Saints and Bum Phillips. Earl Campbell had lost his desire and the intangible attributes which had propelled him to stardom as a Longhorn and as an Oiler.

Even though Earl would now be back playing with his friend and mentor, Bum Phillips, and several of his former Oiler teammates, he was acutely aware that the fans didn't like him and would not accept him. They felt like Bum was bringing over too many Oilers, especially since he had given away a first round draft choice to obtain Earl. New Orleans questioned why Bum needed Earl when the Saints already had George Rogers, a respected, top-notch running back?

All aspects of the Campbell trade had gone against the logic of the New Orleans' fans. The media and fans felt like Earl was past his prime because of his many years of playing raw and bruising ball. The press inferred that Earl was bound to have lost a step or two in the process. In addition, the fans didn't understand why Bum decided to have Earl split playing time with George Rogers, instead of having Earl be the back up to their rookie sensation. Things were not going well for Earl, and he felt the tension.

Regardless of the many negatives, Earl set his mind to the task at hand and vowed to give his all for Bum once again, no matter what the circumstances were. The first order of business was to block out all of the critical, media hype. Then, Earl felt that he could focus on the game he so dearly loved to play, if everyone would just let him do his job and do is best. As had been the case several times in Earl's past, once he took his first lick on the field, the desire factor clicked in and drove him to excel. He finished the '84 season with 468 yards rushing on 168 attempts and four touchdowns. It wasn't the type of year he had hoped for or had achieved in his six years in professional football, but he felt good about his efforts.

Part of this feeling came because Bum decided to trade George Rogers at the end of the season. Bum let it be known openly that Earl Campbell was once again "The Man."

With the news of the Rogers trade, the media and fans turned on Bum and proclaimed their fury openly. To them, it seemed obvious that Bum was trying to establish a "Luv Ya Blue" type atmosphere in a city that didn't want it. New Orleans had never made that "unique connection" with their many losing football teams.

The Saints franchise had been in existence for seventeen years, and the team had never been to a playoff game. Because of this, the media and fans issued a harsh ultimatum to the Executive Management of the Saints: "Bum either wins a playoff spot this year or, Bum can get gone!" Obviously, without fan or media support, this would prove a most difficult challenge for Bum and his players to achieve.

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As the 1985 preseason ended, Bum Phillips was having a difficult time understanding the negative views of the New Orleans fans' and press toward him. He was doing his best with what he had but, without the help of the media and the fans, it made his job doubly difficult. Bum realized that with the negative feelings overshadowing everything else, he would never gain fan support without positive media backing. And this seemed unlikely in "The Big Easy."
Bum never wore his hat inside the Superdome when the Saints played a home game, because his momma had taught him hats should not be worn indoors. After the Saints first preseason loss at home and continuing throughout the season, a disgruntled female Saints fan would stand above the tunnel the players and coaches had to go through to get to the locker room. She positioned herself above the tunnel waiting for Bum Phillips. She would pour an ice cold, sixteen ounce cup of beer directly on top of his uncovered, crew cut head. She never went after any of the players or other coaches, just Bum. Since Bum figured out that she only got him with the beer when the Saints lost, he would just have to win every home game to stay dry.

As it turned out, Bum had a wet season in '85, and the players had a long one. They were 4 - 8 after the first eleven games. Bum received three beer showers for the three home loses. After the third time, following a 27-3 Saints loss to Seattle, Bum dried his sticky head and remarked, "That lady is never gonna have a chance to do that again." No one paid much attention to the remark, or what he meant by it --- except for Earl Campbell. He knew!


After the Saints pulled a stunning upset of the Minnesota Vikings in Minnesota, Bum had time to do a lot of thinking on the long flight back. He was tired. He realized that he had done his best, but it just wasn't working. He decided that retirement was the only proper course of action. He knew that his son Wade, who was an assistant coach with the Saints, would want to finish out the season if the brass would allow it. If not, "so be it."

At that moment of decision, Bum Phillips relaxed as stress lifted from his shoulders. He knew the New Orleans press and fans would be pleased with his retirement announcement.

He also knew one other unmistakable fact, "I tol' ever'body that lady'd never spill a beer on my head again and, by golly, I meant it."

Earl wasn't shocked by the news because he had seen it coming. He knew Bum Phillips. Bum was his friend and a very intelligent man, and Earl understood that Bum knew what was best for Bum.

Wade Phillips was given the nod to finish the season as head coach, finishing with a 1-3 record. The team finished 5-11, and it was apparent that many changes would take place during the off season in New Orleans. Earl didn't know if he would be part of those changes, but he returned to Houston thinking that he would give it one more year. He fully intended to be prepared. Earl knew that it wouldn't be easy in New Orleans without Bum. He also knew that the new coaches, press, and all of the fans would be looking for proof that he could still play the game. If a flaw could be found, Earl knew that New Orleans would be unmerciful on him.

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The Saints named Jim Mora as their head coach for the 1986 season. Mora was a tough, no nonsense, well disciplined coach who understood the challenge that lay ahead of him. His goal was simple that first year as he outlined it to the media and fans. He intended to get rid of the over hill players on the squad and to get the Saints into the playoffs. He knew this would be no easy task, but he knew too, that "Rome wasn't built in a day."

Immediately after the '85 season was over, Earl returned to work out with Tom Williams. His training with Williams had always prepared him in the past, but Earl realized that the upcoming season would be different and difficult. As in his senior year at the University of Texas, Earl knew that he had to be in the best shape of his life when going against all the young running backs who would be vying for his job. With this in mind, Tom Williams and Earl worked rigorously. Earl reported to training camp at an extremely well defined 225 pounds. In all appearances, he looked like the "old Earl" and planned to prove the fans and coaches in New Orleans wrong.

Earl knew he would be scrutinized by all the coaches, but he had no idea that Jim Mora would be keying on him. Mora was looking for any mistakes or deficiencies in Earl's style of play. Earl knew that he was using him to set an example with his players, because he was the "new sheriff in town." He wanted to weed out all those players who couldn't play according to his guidelines. As Earl thinks back, he is convinced that Mora was trying to run him off, in a roundabout way, only he couldn't see it at the time.

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Earl remembers the day like it was just yesterday since it turned out to be one of the happiest, yet most painful days of his life. It was Saturday, August 18, 1986, and the Saints were going up against the New England Patriots in their second preseason game. Going into the game, Earl felt good because he would be playing against several of his old friends. They apparently disregarded any old friendships in the spirit of the game, because several Patriots were giving the veteran running back particularly intense blows. On one particular play, Earl was handed the ball and a huge hole opened up. In the past, when such a hole was presented, the adrenaline would pump and Earl's eyes would bulge with disbelief at his good fortune. After an eight yard gain the hole suddenly collapsed, and Earl was brought down hard by many of the Patriots defensive unit. Since it was third down and the Saints didn't make the necessary yardage, Earl walked off the field to a smattering of boos.

Earl stood on the sideline in shock. He hoped Mora wouldn't put him in again (which he didn't). Earl knew that in the past he would have blown through a hole that size and demolished any defenders who tried to stop him. His performance bothered Earl for the remainder of the game because he always believed that once he was no longer beneficial to the team, "it was time to pull the pin."

After showering, Earl was so physically sore and bruised that he had a difficult time making it back to the dormitory where the team stayed during training camp. Although his whole body was in pain, it was his feet that hurt the worst. He lay in bed hoping for some relief so that he could sleep. None came! The pain graduated to intolerable levels. Earl was forced to crawl on hands and knees to get to the lavatory. As he crawled, he prayed that God would get him through the night.

After he finally was able to crawl back to bed, with tears of helplessness forming at the corners of his eyes, Earl made a decision that he knew would eventually happen. He hadn't anticipated it'd be in this fashion. He picked up the phone and dialed his mother's house in Tyler, hoping she would be awake so he could personally tell her. Alfred, Earl's next oldest brother answered instead. He told Earl that their mother had turned in for the night. Therefore, Alfred would have to be the first to receive the news.
"Alfred, don't wake Momma but, as soon as she gets up in the mornin', tell her that I've decided to retire. Tell her not to be alarmed or worried, because it was my choice," Earl told his brother with obvious emotion edging in on his words.

Alfred listened carefully as Earl told him about his decision and then responded as only an understanding, older brother should, "Earl, I'm happy for you. All your life, you set certain goals for yourself, and you have achieved each one. You don't need to prove yourself any longer. You've already done that to the entire country. Don't worry about Momma. She'll understand. She's always known that this day would come sooner or later, and she will be pleased to find out it was your choice, not theirs. In the meantime, if there's anything you need, just call and I'll be there. Once again, I'm proud of you, man!"

Earl leaned back after the call and a world of stress was lifted from his shoulders. He was perferctly aware that Alfred was right, "Earl Campbell was leaving the game of football on his terms, not someone else's decision."

Since Earl wanted those closest to him to hear the news first, before he informed the Saints and the media got wind of it, he next phoned Darrell Royal. Coach Royal's wife, Edith, answered the phone and informed Earl that her husband was in Colorado. Earl told her the reason for his call, and Mrs. Royal was very understanding. She told Earl that Coach Royal would be pleased to hear about his decision and that she would get in touch with him immediately so that he would know. She told Earl that Darrell would want to talk to him as soon as he could. Her last words made Earl positive that he had made the right decision, "You've always been a hero to us, Earl."

Calling Reuna was relatively easy for Earl since he knew that she would be in favor of his decision. Reuna had known for longer than Earl had that her knight in shining armor had nothing more to prove to anyone. Since the first day she met Earl, she had known that he would be a success, and he had proven that to the world over and over again. Reuna was very happy about Earl's decision when he phoned to tell her, because the physical abuse to her husband's body would end, and the Campell's once again could be reunited as a family on a full time basis. She had not liked living apart when he moved to New Orleans to play with the saints. Her hero was finally coming home to stay.

The final call of the evening was to Bum Phillips, and Earl knew that this one would be difficult. As Earl suspected, Bum, at first thought his good friend was just "joshing" him, because he had played a "darn good game that evening."

When Earl convinced Bum that this was a decision he was definite about, Bum changed his demeanor. He realized that one of the all-time greatest running backs in professional football was about to hang it up. But, Bum was a realist. Like Ann Campbell, he knew this moment would have to come, however, he had always believed that Earl would play through the entire 1986 season.

"Heck, Earl, if that's your decision, I support it one hun'red percent. You've done your time, an' done it well. You've done many people proud, includin' myself, an' above ever'thing else, you did it with class. Don't you worry about what the coaches or media say to or about ya, jest get your stuff an' get on home to your family and friends."

Earl felt at peace with himself and his decision after three important calls had been made, because he knew he had complete support from those who mattered most to him. He lay back down on his bed once again, and for the first time in a very long time, slept peacefully, since he knew that the hardest part of the decision was behind him.

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The following day, Earl asked Jim Skipper, his running back coach, if he could have a word with him. Skipper agreed and talked excitedly about how well his backs had performed the previous evening as they entered his office for privacy.

"Coach, there's only one way I know how to say somethin', and that's straight up. I'm here to inform y'all that I've decided to retire effective last night. Bottom line, coach, 'is that I just don't like playin' football anymore."

Coach Skipper was shocked, at least in appearance, and he tried to talk Earl into rethinking his position.
"Earl, before you do this, let me go get Coach Mora, so he's aware of what's goin' on."

Earl responded, "I don't care who you go get. I've made up my mind and I'm stickin' by my decision."
Mora came into the room, and after Earl informed him of his decision to retire, the head coach truly appeared surprised by Earl's announcement. Mora's response was much the same as Coach Skipper's had been. He requested that Earl wait and allow him to talk with Jim Finks, General Manager of the Saints.

Earl told Mora the same thing that he had told Skipper, "Y'all can call whoever you want, I've made my decision and that's it!"

After Finks Had spoken to Coach Mora, he called the owner of the team, Tom Benson, who lived and officed in San Antonio. Benson was also shocked by Earl's decision and made plans for an immediate flight to New Orleans. He liked Earl and didn't want to see this happen. Benson was one of the few people in the New Orleans' organization who felt that Earl could still play. When Benson met with Earl, he tried unsuccessfully to change Earl's mind and even offered him more money on his contract.
"No thanks, Mr. Benson. You've always been fair with me, and I'm gonna be fair with y'all. My mind is made up. I've done my time, and it's important that I go out on my own and that it wasn't someone else's decision." In the back of his mind, Earl always felt that Coach Mora was going to try to get rid of him sooner or later, one way or the other.

"Heck, Earl. You know I hate to lose you, but if that's your decision, so be it. At least allow us time to contact ESPN and hold an impromptu press conference."

"Tom, I'll do that for y'all, but please make it quick. I wanna get to the airport and home to my family. They need me now, as much as I need them."
"O.K. Earl, good luck. One more thing before you go," the owner said. "I just wanted to say, 'thanks for the memories."

"No sweat, Tom. I'll see y'all on down the road."

That afternoon, ESPN and the local media gathered at the press conference where Earl's retirement from professional football was formally announced. The statement was short, and Earl said very little as he simply bid "adios" to New Orleans and the game that he loved with all his heart.

Later that year, Earl had an opportunity to speak with Jim Skipper, his former running back coach. Skipper admitted to Earl that he made a good decision, at exactly the right time since Coach Mora had planned to cut him before the season began. Earl was grateful to Skipper for his honesty, because the revelation confirmed that his decision had come not a minute too soon. Earl had gotten to throw the first punch and a knock out one at that. Earl knew God had played a part in his decision to leave football at just that time. Skipper's coming clean about the situation only served to verify his belief that God had planned for Earl to retire on his own terms and with dignity.

Earl held no ill feelings toward the city of New Orleans or its fans. He understood that he was being paid big money to perform for these people, and he also knew when the time was right to pull out. Because of his decision to retire, Earl felt like the New Orleans fans would not feel cheated by his playing one more year. Earl Campbell would not do something like that, just for the sake of money. His momma had given him better morals and ethics. If the people in New Orleans had ever bothered to truly get to know The Tyler Rose, they would have realized that he never played football for money. Earl Campbell played football for pride.

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After the press confernece, Earl boarded the first flight he could get for Hobby Airport, Houston. When he was seated, the hostess asked if there was anything she could get for him.

Earl thought for a moment before responding, "Yeah, I'd like six cans a Budweiser."

Shocked, the pretty young attendant informed Earl, "But Mr. Campbell, we're only going to Houston, a forty minute flight, if that."

Earl smiled, leaning back in his seat as he answered, "I know that, darlin', I know."

When they were airborne, Earl was brought the beer. With the smile seemingly etched on his face, Earl never once looked down to the ground at the city or the life he was leaving. Instead, he looked forward to the future and what it held for him. He looked forward to a full-time relationship with his wife and child, and he looked forward to spending time with his mother and family in Tyler. Because of training demands, season schedules, and constant practices that came with a career in professional football, these were pleasures that he hadn't fully experienced in eight years. With so many positive thoughts in his mind, there was no way Earl could have imagined that God still had a challenge for him, one that had nothing to do with football. Instead, this challenge would literally leave Earl fighting for his life with no one to help him. This would become, for the famed Tyler Rose, a true test of his will to live.


The author is an excellent storyteller; the story and the drama are all here in the original. All this really needed was a little refinement here and there (including a lightening up of the attempts to capture the characters' Southern accents; that technique just didn't seem to work here).

SAVE ME THE EFFORT OF SCROLLING.
TAKE ME TO THE EDITED VERSION NOW.

New Orleans: The Last Hurrah

"Earl Campbell is one of the truly genuine people I've come across. He doesn't know the meaning of the word 'I'. With Earl, it's always 'we' or 'us'."
~ O. A. "Bum" Phillips

Earl Campbell left Houston in a storm of controversy and arrived in New Orleans the same way. Houston fans felt he had been unfairly traded, and didn't like the backhanded, clandestine tactics behind the trade. New Orleans fans felt too much had been given away in the trade for this "over the hill" player.

Whatever the case or the city, Earl was not happy with the controversy and the ensuing media criticism. He felt that too much attention was being focused on him as an individual player, when the focus should be on the team effort, in whichever city he was playing football. Something essential was missing from his game when he arrived in New Orleans to play for the Saints and Bum Phillips; he had lost his passion, and no longer had that "fire in the belly" which had propelled him to stardom as a Longhorn and as an Oiler.

Even though Earl would now be back playing with his friend and mentor, Bum Phillips, and several of his former Oiler teammates, he was acutely aware that the fans didn't like him and would not accept him. They thought Bum was bringing over too many Oilers, especially since he had given away a first round draft choice to obtain Earl. New Orleans questioned Bum's need for Earl when the Saints already had George Rogers, a respected, top-notch running back.

All aspects of the Campbell trade had gone against the logic of the New Orleans fans. Media and fans alike felt that Earl was past his prime. In his many years of playing raw and bruising ball, the press implied, Earl was bound to have lost a step or two. In addition, the fans didn't understand why Bum decided to have Earl split playing time with George Rogers, instead of having Earl be the backup to their rookie sensation.

Things were not going well for Earl, and the tension weighed heavily on him.

Despite the many negatives going in, Earl finally decided to set his mind to the task at hand, vowing to give his all for Bum once again, no matter the circumstances. The first order of business was to block out all of the critical media hype. Earl felt that he could focus on the game he so dearly loved to play, if everyone would just let him do his job and do his best.

Fortunately, some of the old fire returned. As had been the case several times in Earl's past, once he took his first lick on the field, the desire factor clicked in and drove him to excel. He finished the '84 season with 468 yards rushing on 168 attempts and four touchdowns. It wasn't the type of year he had hoped for or had achieved in his previous six years in professional football, but he felt good about his efforts.

His positive feelings were reinforced when Bum decided to trade George Rogers at the end of the season, openly proclaiming that Earl Campbell was, once again, "The Man."

But with the news of the Rogers trade, the media and fans turned on Bum and proclaimed their fury openly. To them, it seemed obvious that Bum was trying to establish a "Luv Ya Blue" type atmosphere in a city that just didn't want it. New Orleans fans had never made that unique connection with their many losing football teams.

The Saints franchise had been in existence for seventeen years, but the team had never been to a playoff game. Determined to end this disgraceful record, the media and fans issued a harsh ultimatum to the executive management of the Saints: "Bum either wins a playoff spot this year or, Bum can get gone!" But it was a Catch-22 situation, for without fan or media support, this would prove a most difficult task for Bum and his players to achieve.

* * * * *

As the 1985 preseason ended, Bum Phillips was having a difficult time understanding the negative attitude the New Orleans fans and the press held toward him. He was doing his best with what he had, and doing it without the help of either the media or the fans. The media were key, for Bum realized that he would never gain fan support without positive media backing, but this seemed unlikely in "The Big Easy."

After the Saints' first preseason loss at home, and continuing throughout the season, one disgruntled female Saints fan would stand above the tunnel the players and coaches had to go through to get to the locker room after the game. She was waiting for Bum Phillips, and when he got to just the right spot she would pour an ice cold sixteen-ounce cup of beer directly on top of his head. Because he still held fast to his momma's teachings about not wearing a hat indoors, Bum didn't even have his Stetson to protect him.

Bum couldn't help but notice that this fan never went after any of the players or other coaches, just him. Before too long, though, he figured out that she only got him with the beer when the Saints lost. So if he wanted to stay dry, he would just have to win every home game.

As it turned out, Bum had a wet season in '85, and the players had a long one. They were 4-8 after the first twelve games. Bum received three beer showers for the three home losses. After the third time, following a 27-3 loss to Seattle, Bum dried his sticky head and remarked, "That lady is never gonna have a chance to do that again." No one paid much attention to the remark, or what he meant by it - no one, that is, except for Earl Campbell. He knew.

After the Saints pulled off a stunning upset of the Minnesota Vikings in Minnesota, Bum had time to do a lot of thinking on the flight back to New Orleans. The big win they'd just accomplished wasn't enough to change the course of his thoughts. He realized that he had done his best, but it just wasn't working anymore. The truth was, Bum Phillips was tired. Retirement was the only proper course of action.
He knew that his son Wade, an assistant coach with the Saints, would finish out the season if the brass would allow it. If they wouldn't allow it, well, "so be it."

At that moment of decision, Bum Phillips relaxed, the stress lifting from his shoulders. He knew the New Orleans press and fans would be pleased with his retirement announcement. He also knew one other unmistakable fact: "I told everybody that lady'd never spill a beer on my head again and, by golly, I meant it."

Earl had seen this one coming, and wasn't shocked by the news. He knew Bum Phillips, and understood that Bum knew what was best for Bum.

Wade Phillips was given the nod to finish the season as head coach, finishing with a 1-3 record. The team finished the season 5-11, and it was apparent that many changes would take place during the off season in New Orleans. Earl didn't know if he would be part of those changes, but he returned to New Orleans thinking he would give it one more year. He fully intended to remain prepared for any alternative. Earl knew it wouldn't be easy in New Orleans without Bum, and that the new coaches, the press, and all of the fans would be demanding proof that he could still play the game. If any flaw could be found, Earl knew that New Orleans would be unmerciful in their assessment of it, and of him.

* * * * *

The Saints named Jim Mora as their head coach for the 1986 season. Mora was a tough, no-nonsense, well-disciplined coach who understood the challenge that lay ahead of him. The first-year goals he outlined to the media and fans were simple: he intended to get rid of the over-the-hill players on the squad, and to get the Saints into the playoffs. He knew this would be no easy task, but he knew too, that "Rome wasn't built in a day."

Immediately after the '85 season was over, Earl returned to work out with Tom Williams. His training with Williams had always prepared him in the past, but Earl realized that the upcoming season would be different and considerably more difficult. As in his senior year at The University of Texas, Earl knew that he had to be in the best shape of his life when going against all the young running backs vying for his job. With this in mind, Williams and Earl worked rigorously. Earl reported to training camp at an extremely well-defined 225 pounds. To all appearances, he looked like the "old Earl," and he was all set to prove the fans and coaches in New Orleans wrong.

Earl knew he would be scrutinized by all the coaches, but he had no idea that Mora would be focusing so intently on him. Mora was looking for any mistakes or deficiencies in Earl's style of play, using him to set an example with his players and to establish himself as the boss. He wanted to weed out all those players who couldn't play according to his guidelines. Thinking back, Earl is convinced that Mora was trying to run him off, in a roundabout way.

* * * * *

Earl remembers August 18, 1986 as if it were just yesterday, since it turned out to be one of the happiest and yet most painful days of his life. It was Saturday, and the Saints were going up against the New England Patriots in their second preseason game. Going into the game, Earl felt good because he would be playing against several of his old friends.
As he'd expected, the friendship was left on the sidelines, as several Patriots were giving the veteran running back particularly intense blows. On one play, Earl was handed the ball and a huge hole opened up. In the past, when such a hole had been presented, the adrenaline would pump and Earl's eyes would bulge with disbelief at his good fortune. But now, after an eight-yard gain, the hole suddenly collapsed, and Earl was brought down hard by the Patriots' defensive unit. Since it was third down and the Saints didn't make the necessary yardage, Earl walked off the field to a smattering of boos.

He stood on the sideline in shock, hoping Mora wouldn't put him in again. Fortunately, he didn't. Earl knew that in the past, he would have blown right through a hole that size, demolishing any defenders who tried to stop him. His performance haunted him for the remainder of the game, for he'd always believed that once he was no longer beneficial to the team, "it was time to pull the pin."

After showering, Earl was so physically sore and bruised that he had a difficult time making it back to the dormitory where the team stayed during training camp. Although his whole body was in pain, it was his feet that hurt the worst. He lay in bed hoping for some relief so that he could sleep. None came. Instead, the pain graduated to intolerable levels, and finally, when Earl had to go to the lavatory, he was forced to crawl on hands and knees to get there. As he crawled, he prayed that God would get him through the night.

After he finally was able to crawl back to bed, with tears of helplessness forming at the corners of his eyes, Earl reached a decision that had been a long time in the making. He'd always known it would happen eventually; he just hadn't anticipated it would happen like this. But the time had come.

Earl picked up the phone and dialed his mother's house in Tyler, hoping she would be awake so he could personally tell her first. His next oldest brother, Alfred, answered instead, and told Earl that their mother had turned in for the night. Alfred would have to be the first to receive the news.

"Alfred, don't wake Momma, but as soon as she gets up in the mornin', tell her that I've decided to retire. Tell her not to be alarmed or worried, because it was my choice." His voice cracked with the emotion of actually speaking the words.

Alfred listened carefully as Earl told him about his decision, and responded as only an understanding older brother could. "Earl, I'm happy for you. All your life, you set certain goals for yourself, and you have achieved each one. You don't need to prove yourself any longer. You've already done that to the entire country. Don't worry about Momma. She'll understand. She's always known that this day would come sooner or later, and she will be pleased to find out it was your choice, not theirs. In the meantime, if there's anything you need, just call and I'll be there. Once again, I'm proud of you, man!"

Earl leaned back after the call, and felt the weight of a world of stress lifted from his shoulders. He was perfectly aware that Alfred was right. Earl Campbell was leaving the game of football on his terms, not because of someone else's decision.

Since Earl wanted those closest to him to hear the news first, before he informed the Saints and the media got wind of it, he phoned Darrell Royal next. Coach Royal's wife, Edith, answered the phone and informed Earl that her husband was in Colorado. When Earl explained the reason for his call, she was very understanding, and told Earl that she knew Coach Royal would be pleased to hear about his decision. She promised to get in touch with him immediately, knowing that Darrell would want to talk to Earl as soon as he could. Her last words made Earl positive that he had made the right decision, "You've always been a hero to us, Earl."

Calling Reuna was relatively easy for Earl, for he knew that she would be in favor of his decision. Reuna had known for longer than Earl that he had nothing more to prove to anyone. Since the first day she'd met Earl, she had known that he would be a success, and he had proven that to the world over and over again. As he had expected, Reuna was very happy to hear about Earl's decision - happy that the physical abuse to her husband's body would end, and that the Campbells could once again be reunited as a family on a full time basis. She hadn't liked having to live apart after his move to New Orleans to play with the Saints. And as far as she was concerned, Earl's decision couldn't have come at a better time, for she was seven months pregnant with their second child.

The final call of the evening was to Bum Phillips, and Earl knew that this one would be difficult. As Earl suspected, Bum at first thought his good friend was just "joshing" him, because he had played a "darn good game that evening."

When Earl finally convinced Bum that this was a decision he was certain about, Bum's laughter ended. He realized that one of the all-time greatest running backs in professional football was about to hang it up. But Bum, like Ann Campbell, was a realist. He'd known this moment would eventually come, even though he had always believed that Earl would play through the 1986 season.

"Heck, Earl, if that's your decision, I support it one hundred percent. You've done your time, an' done it well. You've done many people proud, includin' myself, an' above everything else, you did it with class. Don't you worry about what the coaches or media say to or about you, just get your stuff an' get on home to your family and friends."

After these four important calls had been made, Earl felt at peace with himself and his decision. He knew he had complete support from those who mattered most to him. He lay back down on his bed once again, and for the first time in a very long time, slept peacefully, knowing that the hardest part of the decision was behind him.

* * * * *

The following day Earl asked Jim Skipper, his running back coach, if he could have a word with him. Skipper agreed, and, as they entered his office for privacy, talked excitedly about how well his backs had performed the previous evening.
"Coach," Earl began, "there's only one way I know how to say somethin', and that's straight up. I'm here to inform y'all that I've decided to retire, effective last night. Bottom line, coach, is that I just don't like playin' football anymore."

Coach Skipper appeared to be honestly shocked by this simple declaration. He tried to talk Earl into rethinking his decision.

"Earl, before you do this, let me go get Coach Mora, so he's aware of what's goin' on."

Earl responded, "I don't care who you go get. I've made up my mind and I'm stickin' by my decision."
Mora came into the room, and upon hearing Earl's decision to retire, appeared as surprised as Skipper had been. Like Coach Skipper, he requested that Earl wait and allow him to talk with Jim Finks, General Manager of the Saints.

Earl told Mora the same thing that he had told Skipper, "Y'all can call whoever you want, I've made my decision and that's it!"

After Finks had spoken to Coach Mora, he called the owner of the team, Tom Benson, at his office in San Antonio. Benson was similarly stunned by Earl's decision, and made plans for an immediate flight to New Orleans. He liked Earl and didn't want to see this happen; in fact, he was one of the few people in the New Orleans organization who felt that Earl could still play. So when Benson met with Earl, he, too, tried, unsuccessfully, to change Earl's mind, even offering him more money on his contract.

"No thanks, Mr. Benson. You've always been fair with me, and I'm gonna be fair with y'all. My mind is made up. I've done my time, and it's important that I go out on my own and that it wasn't someone else's decision." In the back of his mind, Earl had always felt that Coach Mora was going to try to get rid of him eventually, one way or the other.

"Well, heck, Earl. You know I hate to lose you, but if that's your decision, so be it. At least allow us time to contact ESPN and hold an impromptu press conference."

"Tom, I'll do that for y'all, but please make it quick. I wanna get to the airport and home to my family. They need me now, as much as I need them."

"O.K. Earl, good luck. One more thing before you go," Benson said. "I just wanted to say, 'thanks for the memories.'"

"No sweat, Tom. I'll see y'all on down the road."

That afternoon, ESPN and the local media gathered at the press conference where Earl's retirement from professional football was formally announced. The statement was a short and simple adios to New Orleans, and to the game that he had loved with all his heart.

Later that year, Earl had an opportunity to speak again with Jim Skipper. Skipper admitted to Earl that he had made a good decision, and had made it at exactly the right time, as Coach Mora had planned to cut him before the season began. Earl was grateful to Skipper for his honesty, and the revelation confirmed that his decision had come not a minute too soon. Earl had gotten to throw the first punch, and a knockout one at that.

Once again, Earl sensed the hand of God in his life. Skipper's coming clean about the situation only served to verify that God had planned for Earl Campbell to retire on his own terms and with dignity.

Earl held no ill feelings toward the city of New Orleans or its fans. He understood that he was being paid big money to perform for these people, and he also knew when the time was right to pull out. Earl figured that the already resentful New Orleans fans would feel cheated had he chosen to play one more year. Ann Campbell's son wouldn't ride somebody's coattails like that, just for the sake of money. If the people in New Orleans had ever bothered to truly get to know The Tyler Rose, they would have realized that he never played football for money.

Earl Campbell played football for pride.

* * * * *

After the press conference, Earl boarded the first flight he could get for Houston. Once he was seated, the hostess asked if there was anything she could get for him.

Earl thought for a moment before responding, "Yeah, I'd like six cans of Budweiser."

Shocked, the pretty young attendant informed Earl, "But Mr. Campbell, we're only going to Houston, a forty-minute flight, if that."

Earl smiled, leaning back in his seat as he answered, "I know that, darlin', I know."

When they were airborne, Earl was brought the beer. There are times, after all, when a man just has to celebrate. With the smile seemingly etched on his face, Earl prepared to enjoy the flight home. He never once looked out upon the city or the life he was leaving; instead, he fixed his gaze on the future, and on all the blessings to come. Earl was looking forward to a full-time relationship with his wife, his child, and his child-to-be, and to spending time with his momma and the rest of his family in Tyler. Because of training demands, season schedules, and constant practices that came with a career in professional football, these were pleasures that he hadn't fully experienced in eight years.

With so many positive thoughts in his mind, there was no way Earl could have imagined that God still had a challenge for him, one that had nothing to do with football. Instead, this challenge would literally leave Earl fighting for his life, with no one to help him. This would become, for the famed Tyler Rose, a true test of his will to live.

The Tyler Rose: The Earl Campbell Story is copyright © 1997-2005 by Schuromil Publishing Company

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